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my story
ok my story i kno it wont be read to most ppl though i want atleast a few ppl to read it and comment dont comment bad or else...
H_E_A_V_E_N_L_Y Ch. 1
H_E_A_V_E_N_L_Y
-"Lets fall into the dark" His arm streched out. She had the choice,
join the one she loved into the dark or be carried away by the paper
moon. She streached her hand to the moon. As she was being carried
away, he was sinking in. She wiped her tears, "I love you". He laughed,
"See you in our dreams". "You'll be back right?", she whispered. He
screamed. "NOOOOO!!!!",she screamed. "I want you with me", he cried.
"come back... please", she suffered, "I'll be back for you!". He laughed
as his eyes became dark...... he sank in.
She had chosen the moon. -

She woke up. "come back...", she wiped her tears.
She started writing on peice paper.
"Hi, my name is Hatashi, Shana.
And this is the start." She dropped her pencil. As her hand froze from
the cold of the weather. "KYAHHH, its cold'', she screamed. Everyone
stared at her. She scratched the behind of her head. (" I guess...." wink
She stared out of the window and saw her friend. She waved out
screaming his name '' JUNSUUUHYUN!!!! ". He stared up and waved back
";] ". He was wearing ear muffs, and sweater and the school uniform.
Shana continued waving, as she almost fell out, her classmate caught
her. "Careful were at the 4th floor", he said. She bowed and scratched her
head while saying "Hehe I know I'm just saying hi to my friend, Junsuhyun,
thank you um -" "Yuji...", he said. "ahah Yuji, right thanks anyway.", she
replied. She bowed and walked away to field. Yuji's hair messed up, "ehh."
He fixed his hair. She was down at the field she tried searching for Junsuhyun.
Yuji was staring outside. The shadow came up and the sun shown.
Shana's shadow was deformed. He stared, the shadow was in a form that
was about to eat her. "SHANA!", he screamed. The sun disappeared and
the shadow disappeared. Shana looked up, but Yuji was already hiding.

At home.
Yuji's mother came up to Yuji, "Yuji I don't approve of you bullying
girls". "huh...? Okaa-san its the other way.", he grabbed for a drink
but his home backed away, "hmp" .
continuing THIS TUESDAY!! :]
If you like it please pm me rating it and tell me your comments
PREVIEW OF THE NEXT CHAPTER .
Shana's lead broke as time paused. She headed outside as she found
and black and purple butterfly. She played with it. As a Denizen (a
fire killer, as in it will kill you by the element of fire) was behind her with
a fire knife.... is it her end? TO BE CONTINUED.





 
 
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