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Far from Perfection
Vast Waters

Summer's delicate breeze, wisps my hair.
As if it was a trailing horse's tail.
The setting sun, makes the ocean below.
Shimmer as if it was a thousand diamonds.
Setting ablaze, the orange turbulent waters.
Crash onto the cold rocky shore.
Sending a salty wind, to my mouth and nose.
That taste of a ripe green apple,
bitter and delicious.
From the cliff, I look below, in a curious position.
As the sun disappears behind the endless ocean.
My feet dangle, taunting the ocean.
These waters are the one I love, my heart yearns to set sail.
For now, I am stuck, a child who dreams,
and a adult who wishes.
To embrace the sea's hypnotizing gaze.







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AtrumViridisLupus
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commentCommented on: Tue Aug 17, 2010 @ 07:56am
Just a old poem I wrote for my creative writing class.


commentCommented on: Tue Aug 17, 2010 @ 08:08am
It's really pretty i like it. i can feel the emotion that went into it and envision what you are saying. it is very well done i like it a lot.



tomenegi
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AtrumViridisLupus
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commentCommented on: Tue Aug 17, 2010 @ 08:22am
Thank you so much for reading, and I am glad that you liked it.


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