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Whispers from a White Feather
Hello my readers, I am Snow that Flutters down like Feathers. I am a poet on Gaia Online and Tumblr. I have been writing since 2013. My Tumblr: http://flutterysnowfeathers.tumblr.com My Ko-fi: http://ko-fi.com/snowfeatherswrites
"Advanced"
We are known as "advanced" beings.
The ones with the most feeling.
But, how are we advanced?
When some of us put others down?
Making others frown
while they smile.
Using their stupidity to get what they desire
while others get cut down by the sharp wire.
Cutting down others hopes and potential
so that they can go beyond mental.
They continue to tear
as we continue to bear.
As they rise, some of us fall.
Greed is their feed.
While some of us are deprived from our need.
Our world has fallen upside down.
Good people are laughed at like they are clowns.
They become insulted and receive revolted looks.
Getting bullied into one corner.
And feeling like a foreigner.
Their potential to enhance this once beautiful place has decreased
because they are now slowly becoming deceased.
All because of the chances falling into the wrong hands.
Now, there is nothing in the way of their stand.
-Snow that flutters down like feathers






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commentCommented on: Sun Nov 01, 2015 @ 09:09am
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commentCommented on: Sun Nov 01, 2015 @ 11:55pm
This poem conveys the true nature of the vast majority of humanity (a nature that quickly spreads further and further each day).



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xSaKura-kyandiiX
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commentCommented on: Thu Nov 12, 2015 @ 03:16am
This is so true, says a lot about our society D:
I really like the line
"They continue to ear
as we continue to bear" C:


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