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Whispers from a White Feather
Hello my readers, I am Snow that Flutters down like Feathers. I am a poet on Gaia Online and Tumblr. I have been writing since 2013. My Tumblr: http://flutterysnowfeathers.tumblr.com My Ko-fi: http://ko-fi.com/snowfeatherswrites
Raising the Youth
We raise our children to grow.
A chance to change their flow.
But, what it is not right is the controlling of that flow.
Some of us deliver the deadly blow.
Enough power to scar their thoughts.
Enough for their soul to rot.
The surface of the mind becomes a drought
because they no longer have the ability to seek
when they are crippled and weak.
What is the purpose within that?
There should no longer be the role of dream murderer.
Instead a light to extend the children further.
A time to mend the broken dreams
with the gentler seams.
Lessen the visions of floppy fish
on the unclean dish.
Instead, offer a better wish.
A clearer view on what is worth their every being
and seeing.
-Snow that flutters down like feathers






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Vill E Fied
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commentCommented on: Sun Dec 20, 2015 @ 02:54am
"Constructive influence" is what should be provided. However, the problem is that many mistakenly/foolishly believe that they are, when in actuality they are not. Such a fantastic, thought-provoking poem you have here, sweetheart~


commentCommented on: Tue Dec 22, 2015 @ 05:53am
i love how your poems are always from your heart, it is very personal but also relatable. heart



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