so i have got my teams assignment for the slayer master.. so me and my aposyi.. so there we`re walking along the road heading towards the exit gates.. when all of a sudden ....A RANDOM ENCOUNTER.. from the ninja of the desert appered out of nowhere..(vini vini..*Ahem*..were was i ...)..
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i am a high rank-s slayer... i hunt random monsters and ninja that cross my path.. and i stalk thee pray...
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so i have got my teams assignment for the slayer master.. so me and my aposyi.. so there we're walking along the road heading towards the exit gates.. when all of a sudden ....A RANDOM ENCOUNTER.. from the ninja of the desert appered out of nowhere..(vini vini..*Ahem*..were was i ...)..
it sounds like a pretty good plot but you have to work on getting it to flow smoothly. plus some words/sentences i don't get. i'm a lil harsh yes, but you asked for it. lol