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Poem : Fire Fire This is a short poem I've been working on hope you like it. Also I'm a little absessed with fire Fire Fire in the dark. Dance Dance in your glass chamber surounded by the night. Light light of the flame as it dances with the shadows surounding it. Burn Burn the wax from the Candle as the wax hardens on it's way down. Heat heat searching for a way out of its prison.

Posted by: emo_neko_girl Wed Jun 21, 2006 @ 12:10am

Dude..... Gaara and Gir are dancing together lol

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Commented on: Mon Dec 04, 2006 @ 03:18am


	I think it needs some work.... BUT DON'T GIVE UP!!!! there are poets in all of us, they just need insparation........ needs more fire...... and the pic makes me sad crying

Commented on: Mon Dec 04, 2006 @ 03:34am


	^^ here's one I did a while ago..... =LUST= I feel a fire buring inside me Hoping that this fire will just die down People's feelings flooding over me I almost feel like I'm going to drown. I just want these things to finally stop Wishing, Waiting for the time to sleep I hope that I don't give and drop Walking into darkness I take a Leap. Landing on the grass I start Running Suddenly I am lying on the ground I look up and see the heavens are stunning Ifeel like I am floating on the world My mind came loose and started to unfurl.

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