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Keero's Thoughts
These are just random thought that i might have here or there. And they're just current events on what's happening with my life( computer troubles....blah blah blah)And maybe a few poems too.
Random Song( need some help please? )
Tortured soul.
Oh tortured soul
Bending to the will of this pain
Take from me
All from me
the thing i held in vain

here i lay
as the night turns to morning
And Here i have to stay
For this is my "world"

No one can tell me
That i'm not hurting
Chained to this idea i have

There's nothing i fear
Unless you are not real
Then all i hoped for is lost again

Tortured Soul
Oh tortured soul
Twisting in my own pain
Because of me
All was me
Creating this in vain!

I can't see
through the void i made
This feeling has stayed
In the well of my soul

The darkness has taken
Everything
I cannot break free
For i can no longer see

This path i made!

Tortured soul
Yes tortured soul
My feeling has stayed the same
This is me
Simply just me
This feeling of unwanted shame.







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gothic_monsterman
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commentCommented on: Sat Oct 14, 2006 @ 07:32am
Sounds very good my friend...but it seems to lack rythem. The beat seems to change with each verse...


commentCommented on: Sun Oct 22, 2006 @ 09:57am
Youre right!! i need to change that...But...how?!.. crying



Keero_Tashimi
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