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poetry a whole bunch of poetry i put together alot of people like it i hope you do 2


strawberry.scented
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your name is sharp and horrible
like a galaint night that is no longer noble
you seem to shine omung all the rest of this s**t
but yet iam still going slit
and iam feeling rather blue
because these days get gray for you

well i dont miss you
like no one cares about how iam screwed
as it thickens so does the fog around me
and iam dieing finally
in they cemetary is where ill be
now you open your eyes and finally see

how much i really miss you it hurts so badly
well now my eyes are open and i see
but its to late and iam gone
why did everything go wrong
and you cant help but to cry
crying screaming and asking why

now this is where it all starts
this is where the lovers truly part
i really love you with all my heart





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xo femme fatale
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comment Commented on: Wed Dec 20, 2006 @ 12:05am
That is fantastic.
WHY ARE YOU SUCH A GOOD WRITER!?
gonk heart
*glomp*


comment Commented on: Wed Dec 20, 2006 @ 04:19am
That is truly beautiful... heart heart heart



Vampiric Sinner (Amaya27)
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anayenda
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comment Commented on: Wed Dec 20, 2006 @ 04:36pm
It actually.. rimes.. or however you call that..
horrible-noble.. s**t-slit.. blue-you..

I don't like poems that rime eek

My poems never do.

I wish you could understand mine..

They're Dutch though..

But I do like yours.
Even though it rimes.
And even though it sounds depressed.
I do like it.


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