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Poetic Attempts
just poetry, um.. Personnal thoughts about things whether serious or um.. Stupid.. Otherwise occasional going-ons in my life
Bad Day
Today I originally had a draft to speak of
But seeing that certain events occured
I must change the format to this thereof
I must stop to tell a story seeming absurd...

I had been degraded, pinned down against my will
I had my pretentious calm stripped of my being
All for the 'benefit' and the 'right' of the stand still
And yet I was a side show, people were seeing

Blood, Tears, Mucus and saliva flowed throughout
The very being I occupy in front of mass crowd
Shame overcomes me as I desperately shout
"Please let me be, please let me strip my shroud"

And with that they shipped me away to my hell
But in the end, despite occurences, all is well






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Morrisa
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commentCommented on: Tue Jan 09, 2007 @ 06:14am
*snuggle*
I hope after said occurence you ended the day on a good note.
I can't decide which of the poems are my favorite.
They're all so well written 3nodding .
You make me love poetry again...
*snuggle*


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