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Neona Rois Naiacinaed
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Not at my best...
Sentence writing...
In all my dreams, I would have never thought I’d find a man like Daniel. He made me feel so wanted, so needed. He turned my whole view of myself around. Daniel taught me that everyone deserves to be loved no matter who they are or what they’ve done. He is gone now, but is not forgotten. He shall live on in my heart and I will continue to share this lesson with everyone I meet. Whether it will be through a simple action or actually telling them, I can not determine at this point. All I know is that my heart will never forget him or the love he so openly shared.

For this one the sentence was... My heart will never forget... I don't think I did quite as good as I usually do with writing on this one...





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TutelarKnight
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Sat Mar 24, 2007 @ 04:23am


I find it to be an expression of your work worth reading.

And if you don't think it is as good as it can be, then fine tune it. Change the ordering, reword it add to it... remove parts, do what you feel you need to do, to achieve satisfaction.


Neona Rois Naiacinaed
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Sun Mar 25, 2007 @ 04:00am


Thanks, David. *smiles gently*

I could probably do that. 3nodding


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