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This is the journal that from now on will hold all my poems that dont have to ryhme.

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THE GIRL WHO FOUND HER FEELINGS She caught every falling star And hung them around her for luck. She picked up the pieces and fixed her heart And hung it around her neck. Her coal stained coat hid her smile It was a burden to have around. Her feelings inside dyed her clothes black No color could better express her. But there came a day when he fell in her life And she caught him with both hands. She made a wish and gave him a kiss and that's how the story ends.

Posted by: lovehateit Mon Mar 26, 2007 @ 08:05pm

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Reigis
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Commented on: Mon Mar 26, 2007 @ 09:59pm


	mrgreen thats b e utifull

Commented on: Wed Mar 28, 2007 @ 01:08am


	cry .......nice....

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Commented on: Tue Apr 03, 2007 @ 03:07pm


	I like that one alot! biggrin

Commented on: Tue Apr 03, 2007 @ 08:59pm


	That's a really nice poem! crying

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Commented on: Mon Apr 09, 2007 @ 04:50pm


	awwww heart 3nodding

Commented on: Sat Apr 21, 2007 @ 06:39am


	Very nice, having saddness in the begging then happiness at the end. I like how you ended your poem.

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Shingami Hiroshi
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Commented on: Mon May 07, 2007 @ 09:29pm


	Thats really good!

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