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Story Booklet
Currently featuring the sci-fi story 'A.L.P.H.A', a drama swirled in with a bit of comedy, romantic entanglements, and webs upon webs of secrets.
Redeemption
I really don't know how to spell that, but..Here's another one that I wrote in a dark mood...

I could and I should,
And you know that I would,
But I can't bring myself to do it.

The sword hands in my hand,
And you cry in front of me,
And as the tears fall I see.

Your misery, the suffering,
And all of the pain,
Falls around me, as if it is rain.

Metal clatters to the floorrr,
And you look up in hope,
To see me dash out the door.

I think as I run,
All the wrongs that I've done,
And I need to set myself right.

So I stand in the snow,
And the wind starts to blow,
I'm here, all alone in the field.

The sword, it is gone,
But my dagger is here,
To the light, I am now near.

I plunge in the point,
And the pain surrounds me,
All the pain I've caused I see.

I lie in blood-stained snow,
And I see you come running,
I smile, for the light is now coming.

I could and I should,
And you knew that I would,
And I have now brought forth redeemption.

Tell me what you think!






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Lykorish
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commentCommented on: Thu Oct 14, 2004 @ 01:36am
I think it's awesome. mind if i steal your talent? blaugh


commentCommented on: Thu Oct 14, 2004 @ 03:43am
Noooo!! MY TALENT!! MINE!!!



NoxiaIis
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Lykorish
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commentCommented on: Sat Oct 16, 2004 @ 04:58pm
fine but i still want it.... im bad at this kinda stuff sweatdrop


commentCommented on: Sun Oct 17, 2004 @ 05:37am
SOmeday you'll find your talent. Or steal a different person's talent. blaugh



NoxiaIis
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Lykorish
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commentCommented on: Sun Oct 17, 2004 @ 01:07pm
I already know my talent- but i still want yours xd


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