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an old random blurb..from long ago...
I think the 2nd entry came out sort of bad....So here is a treat 3nodding

those from the old LC charity may recognize this xD

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*sits in the corner looking out the window...all is dark...only the streetlights and the lights from the comfort of others own homes give off a nice aurora...
the streets down below are dark and contain nothing...like no one has walked on them for eternity...a waft of cold blows through the air. It is to cold to give off a strong smell but if you let the wind blow around you...let it flow around your body...you feel...you sense it coming....

looking up into the sky you surely sense it now.......the smell that can comfort...but can sometimes kill...the charcoal like smell...you feel tiny droplets in the air...they gently kiss your cheeks...you spread out your arms...welcoming it...welcoming it's gentleness. From some unknown distance you hear and old song being played.....your favorite song when you were young......a lullabye that tells of stories long ago

The tune plays from afar as you raise your hands higher into the sky......and......the sky kisses your cheeks some more as a slight tingle goes through your whole body with every single one. You open your eyes again as you feel a brush of air wipe your eyes...you seem to see a figure fade in the distance......and see it off sadly...as the falling of the snow acts as a fading horizon.....*
*nothingness.......there is nothingness....your arms go limp as the idea dawns into your mind....the wind stops.....the white powder slows it's descent...you drop your gaze onto the ground...and watch the snow fall gently onto each other.......and then.......you let a part of you fall on top of the white dust......it dissapates the whiteness on contact.......you feel sorry for it but it will not stop...another gasp of cold air surrounds you. you look up...hearing someone call you from far away....someone deep in your mind....but their voice is obscured into the song...the lullabye of long ago....and then.......you hear laughter from after......giggles of joy.....from afar.....through the mist of your blurred vision....you see figures dancing..playing and then.........you close your eyes briefly to clear your vision.....those same figures that were dancing before your eyes a moment ago.......they lie on the ground......limp and as white as the snow.....a stronger gust of wind blows into your face....and you shield yourself with your right arm on instinct...realizing your mistake...you qucikly lower your arm after it has passed......they are gone...only faded prints in the snow remain....only the slowing down of the song from long ago can be heard...yet it's tune grows fainter and fainter as the wind continues to try and comfort you...*
*you suddenly hear a bang......what is it from?...what was it's intention....you look up into the sky again...and see the dust fall onto you....your tears join with them in harmony...all have the same goal...all companions of sorts...your mind becomes lightheaded but you hear it again...it comes back...the song of your past...the song of long ago...the wind blows around you......hugging you gently....ever so caringly...the sky's kisses comfort you...but then you notice...they are no longer kisses..they are tears too....
"do not cry......I will be right here......forever....to keep you company......."
you slowly let yourself lie down...first falling onto your knees than softly lying on the ground.....you let your hands relax...and let your body melt into the ground...one with the earth...and you close your eyes...as the sky tucks you in with it's tears......and......you fall.....asleep*






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Miso Soup
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commentCommented on: Thu Oct 14, 2004 @ 07:28pm
crying 'Tis so beautiful.


commentCommented on: Mon Oct 18, 2004 @ 06:23pm
crying mm yes, I still love this piece even moreso then the series of writings I wrote for that IFF (Narase)

although after a while...I noticed I typed something wrong..and I don't mean the obvious typos/misuse of grammer...?



Nadistu
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