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I am tired and I just want to quit

TO DIE TONIGHT
People never bother to listen,or pay attention to those
Who cry for help
They say not to commit suicide, or go to hell
But fail to really stop them when they wish
TO DIE TONIGHT
Do you see the pain inthier eyes,
Do you even dare to care?
How can you say you feel our pain
When you don't know what its like to want
TO DIE TONIGHT
Why do you wonder why we hide in the shadows?
Why we seem so distured?
Have you ever bothered to listen, or pay attention to
thoughs who cry for help and wish
TO DIE TONIGHT
Will you help them get help, or will you help them die?
Will you ingnore them?
Will you preach to them like a pastor?
Will you lend them a sympathetic ear?
Will you lend a shoulder for thoughs to cry on who want
TO DIE TONIGHT
Tou are sadly mistaken if you think it only happens
on the Soap Operas'
You are terriblely mistaken if you think it only happens
on the NEWS
Because there are people who want
TO DIE TONIGHT

this is an intro to my poems I want imput about if they are worthy of publishing into a book.
my poems do tend to be dark and depressing but there are poeple that have written darker poems than me. ( no offense to those that are Gothic)

my poems will be the same as Glariel-clan-clan's sweatdrop since we are one in the same