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Poetry Why should I tell you about my life? It's not very exciting, to tell the truth. So instead, I'll write. And if you want to read, go write ahead. Just don't tell me it sucks. I don't need to hear that at the moment, thank you very much.


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Don't
(I wrote this when I was feeling a little down. I haven't gotten over this guy I had a huge crush on for a long time, and it hurt. And so I put my feelings on paper. It's not the best, I know, but those are my feelings in words. Don't tell me they suck. My feelings have been stomped on too many times.

Don't

Don’t look at me
Don’t talk to me
Don’t touch me
Leave me alone

It hurts too much
My heart breaks too much
Seeing you together
And I fall

Don’t look at her
Don’t talk to her
Don’t touch her
Look at me

Every time I hear this song
I start to cry
Because it makes me think of you
And I know you don’t feel the same

Don’t look at me
Don’t talk to me
Don’t touch me
Leave me alone

Cause you don't see me
And you don't need me
And you don't love me
The way I wish you would
The way I know you could


(song lyrics from Josie and the Pussycats)

-Mitsu





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Clover-Sohma
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Sun Jul 15, 2007 @ 07:31am


I know how you feel. crying .btw I love that movie and it's music!!


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Hinarei
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Tue Jul 24, 2007 @ 12:23am


I think this poem's just as good as anyone else and you should be proud your even able to put into words how you feel unlike some poeple (me most of the time.) Although I did write a poem very similar to this one. It had the exact same feeling to it. But I've only ever fallen for assholes who cheat on me. I hope yours is at least a better choice and I hope your over him by now....It took me so long to get over "Him"......


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