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my story
ok my story i kno it wont be read to most ppl though i want atleast a few ppl to read it and comment dont comment bad or else...
Chapter 15 WOOT!!
Girl's life--- Boy's life
Chapter 15 :]
previously on chapter 14:
This letter can pause time no,... it can control time take care of it carfully, charish it,
keep it.

Yours truly,
Saito...

Chapter 15:
The capturing of Louise and Saito
Saito slept at the time of 10 pm. Louise just finished working, cleaning, and changing.
Before going to sleep Louise looked at the sky one last time for the day.
She remembered somethings when she was small...
Like that the boat was her hiding place when she was sad. Usually when she was sad a man named Viscount Werdas
would protect her and well usually just guard her. Louise thought her thoughts and finally went to sleep without any disturbances.
In the morning was SUPPOSED to be a normal morning but instead its was different.
Saito woke up first then Louise on the way heading to work
with Saito, Louise and Saito were captured.
The face was blurry to see. There mouths were covered and Saito couldn't get his sword
unfortunatly. Saito and Louise were pushed into a room, yet still not knowing who took them.
Right when Louise said I wish Viscount Werdas
was here to save us, the door opened and there showed Viscount Werdas. Louise was suprised and thought he was saving them but only Saito knew
that Viscount Werdas was the one who took them away.
Saito tried to tell Louise but Louise didn't believe such cruel things.
Viscount Werdas said Louise im here to protect you its an order from the princess. Saito said Really? the princess. Louise said Saito hush.
Viscount Werdas said yes the princess. I thought I should help because I'm way stronger than that "Saito". Saito thought, What are you thinking?
I'm stronger I went into war.
Viscount Werdas said Plus I was a Captin for the dragons and I survived.
And didn't Saito die? Louise said Yes...but he survived as you see.
Viscount Werdas noticed and said Yes but I told when you were small in the boat that when you got old enough you and
me will get married, were already engaged. Saito stood up and said she did not -shocked-. Louise said....no.... Saito I did accept it... I'm sorry Saito.
Viscount Werdas finally said Well there its decided We'll leave tomorrow or when your ready we'll go and get married.






User Comments: [1]
YugiGumi
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Sat Jul 18, 2009 @ 10:09pm


heart heart I like the part where Viscount Werdas comes in but it was shocking that Lousie agreed that when they were little they promised each other that they would get married...And Saito must be really sad.... crying crying


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