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Psychic Strikeforce
As the city of Psykia fell to the dark ruler, Abbys, I knew nearly all was lost. All that remained as resistance was me, My phoenix Rio, my cousin Sal and his wolf Dogma, and our friend Katrina and her falcon Falka.
Sal
I had woken up, my eyes burning from laying straight up, the sun shining in my eyes.
"Sal! Get up!" Derek shouted.
"Oh calm down, Derek, it's too damn early!" I retaliated.
"Sal, Do as you're told! Derek's not just your cousin now Sal, he's our leader!" Katrina yelled at me from an untracable direction.
"Sal, take out your gauntlets." The overcontrolling basterd ordered me.
As much as I wanted to punch him, I did what I was told. I took my emerald lined black gloves out of my black backpack and put them on.
"Now, attack me." Another order...
I rushed at him, keeping low and going as fast as possible. Going at 37 miles per hour, I swung at his middle body section. Missing, not connecting with any swings. Until he tapped my chest with his palm, and I launched back, onto the dry savahna grass.
"Gah!" I screamed.
"You're pathetic Sal. Swing where I'm going to be, not where I am. If you keep fighting the way you are now, you will never be able to defeat Celestio!"
It's not that easy hitting something that can move at over 100 Miles per hour.

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  • User Comments: [1]
    Hertzsprung
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    Thu Sep 17, 2009 @ 11:41am


    kk.
    I'll just comment on this one so...
    Here it goes.

    It has a great story
    Good plot and character development even for a short entry
    It makes me want to read more (I'm a bookworm so don't hesitate to write more if you want biggrin )
    Even though at first it would seem confusing on the part on who is the person talking in a particular entry but once you'll see it then its fine(for me i guess its confusing at first sweatdrop )
    Just be careful of your spelling.

    sittie_chan


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