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Story's of the Night
I have never explored this part of town. It fantasized me so I found myself returning again today. I entered a simple bar it never looked to be busy but I didn't get to go in because of the night falling. I walk in to the bar to find it holding a good amount of people by not packed like most bars in my area of town. But there was something strange about this place, with the way it pulled me in and made me not want to leave to second I entered to door. "You look like a new face" A young man with a muscle shirt, black skinny jeans, and a nice black leather jacket. His hair was short with a messy spike do to it, but it looked good expectantly with his illuminating blue eyes.
"Y-yes" I stuttered will my loss for words as he grabbed my hand genitally and pulled me in.
"How would you like me to help you here for your first time?" he says as I slowly shake my head yes transected by him."Then lets find a place quiet." He said as he leaded me to the back. Locking the door behind use he walks over to me "Now we can get started with some really fun." He pushess me down on the bed and rips my close off.
~Rader~
heart Sorry that one was hard for my to get started. How how well do you think I did? heart






User Comments: [2]
blackattk
Community Member





Tue Sep 02, 2014 @ 06:33am


This story was pretty cool. I liked it. You seemed to have better control over your POV (point of view) which is good! Awesome!

Try this on for size

It was only a matter of seconds before I would reach the final beacon, but it was much too late for my competitors.


Rader Shadowfang
Community Member





Tue Sep 02, 2014 @ 03:02pm


Let's give it a shot.
~Rader~


User Comments: [2]
 
 
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