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Story Time!!!
This is my new diary. It contains not so much secret stuff, so it is alright for people to look and enjoy it. I would like to write about upcoming events, and hope that you don't find it boring. lol. Please enjoy
My first chapter
HEY EVERYONE!!!!! I am finally releasing my first chapter of my first story. I don't quite have a title yet, (yes i am behind) so if you want, please give me some ideas for what might happen next and a title. Once again, oh I can't stop saying it, I was inspired by Kagome-Chan, my friend. Thanks!!!!! heart So, here it is. Please comment!!!!! oh and i make my chapters short based on what the idea is for each of them xp

"Class is dismissed. Have a good weekend" Mr. Amariu said, waving to the students. Everyone left the school and headed towards the giant city of Ming Chin. They met their friends and walked around, talking and shopping. All, but Kitsu Hamika. Kitsu was a very beautiful seventeen year old with long black hair and brown eyes. She was new to the city of Ming Chin. She, in her school uniform, carried her books and walked down the "not so crowded" streets.

About a mile later, she came to a park. "Such a little park this is, no people, no benches, but many wonderful trees" she said to herself. She sat down by one of the trees and started doodling on some light paper. Ten minutes later, she had created a beautiful drawing of a young handsome man; a little older than her as well. Then, out of the tree to the left of her, jumped a boy. He walked over to Kitsu and stared at the picture she drew.

"Hey! That looks a lot like me!" he admitted. "Oh!" Kitsu said frightened. "Oh sorry, did I scare you? I didn't mean to." the boy apologized. "No, im okay. I just hadn't seen you there. You're right though, it does look a lot like you." Kitsu smiled.

"Well, nice to meet you, my name is Haruta." he waved. He had long straight black hair, and bright blue eyes. He had a light colored T-shirt and black pants on, exactly as the picture was.

"Im Kitsu Hamika. Have we ever met before?" Kitsu asked, with one brow raised. "No not at all. And that is what confuses me. We have never met, and yet you draw a picture that looks just like me.

Above them, storm clouds were forming. "Uh oh, looks like a storm is approaching. I had better get home. Nice meeting you Haruta!" Kitsu started to walkf off. "Wait Kitsu! I'll walk you hom!" Haruta offered. "oh you had better not. My house is two miles away from here." She said. "Oh well, thats not good. You will never get home without hitting the storm. Besides, you have tons of books to carry. Why, don't you come over to my house and stay for dinner? Just until the storm clears up, thatis. And its not too far away. Haruta explained. "Well, I guess it would be alright. Anyways, I have no one to come home to." Haruta took her books and put his arm around Kitsu's shoulder. Kitsu's cheeks turned red, flushed with embarrasement. They walked off into the storm. " Uhhh, Haruta, are we supposed to be heading into the storm?"Kitsu asked. "Of course. Dont you trust me?" Haruta replied, with a worried frown. "Yes, I trust you." They continued walking. And in a couple minutes, it began to rain.






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Kagome_Sakura_Chan
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commentCommented on: Mon Jul 24, 2006 @ 05:50pm
^-^ Yay good job on the first chapter! It's interesting o_O I wonder what will happen between Kitsu-chan and Haruta-sama.... ^w^ anyway, I'm sure you'll think of the title later in the story. In fact, I had no idea what my story's title would be like until I was done with it ((==_== I'm...turtle slow...when I'm not in school....)). And if you need help with one, I'm sure that I'll be able to help you ^-^. Arigato for the dedication crying I feel so woved whee . Ja ne!


commentCommented on: Mon Jul 24, 2006 @ 05:57pm
ya i am kinda wondering about what will happen to. I kinda have an idea but im not sure. sweatdrop takes me a while to figure something out when i am making up.



Kitsu Hamika
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commentCommented on: Sun Jul 30, 2006 @ 05:00am
=D Wow, that's a good storyline, makes me wonder what will happen next!!! xp


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