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this is my dumb journal filled mostly with poetry and some other s**t. mostly whatever i feel like putting in it.
random poem
ok im bored so im goin to write a poem if u like good for you if you dont ******** you


As the pian grows
it deepens and slowly becomes stronger
wheter this pain is worth it
i do not know

if only...only if
i could end it with a knife
maybe...just maybe
there might be enough room
for your love to fit

until that day
your love sits in my hands
slowly slipping through like water
as i watch it go
my tears stream down like rain
they never end
they continue until some
i beg of only some
pain to go away
so that i may love once again

my hands reach out
for your help
you look at me
differently then everyone else
i see warmth and love in your eyes
while in everyone elses
there is ice and hatred

i feel your hand lift my sorrows
you see my tears
and wipe them away
for this i love you deeply



wow that was longer than i thought it would be....that came right off the top of my mind...tell me wotcha think....if anyone wanders if its directed towards anyone its only just my thoughts so its not






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senshie_tokanowa
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commentCommented on: Sat Nov 11, 2006 @ 04:28pm
~Damn i was hopin you were writing it for me xd just kiding but that really was a pretty good poem...very...deep...I LOVE IT!!!~


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