this one is a bit long but i think its my best so far any suggestions or advice is HIGHLY appreciated...this one is good but it has some disturbing features in it kinda like Edgar Allan Poe but im far from being that good..well here it is
Angel of Hell
I see them,
your wings
they are there
to sheild me from
those who wish to cause
me harm once again
their color is of
the deepest shade
of the darkest blue
with the fierciest fire's red tips
your feathers so smooth
yet so intense it
makes me wonder...
how can such a creature be mine?
for you are my
Angel of Hell
sent here to
be my guardian
of my love, my trust,
and my pain.
I see them
your fangs
they are there
to ward off the pain
they elongate onto
your ruby lips
and gleam a
dangerous shade of white
i feel them
every time you kiss me
their piercing structure
always penetrates my
delicate skin ever so slightly
For you are my
Angel of Hell
sent here to daunt
all of our enemies
I see them
your eyes
they are there
to watch me
live my dire life
they gaze deep into
my darkness filled soul
the gaze goes soo far
that the darkness isnt there
they are a shade of
brown so dark that they
are seeming;y black
and so deep i
get lost at every
sight of them
for you are my
Angel of Hell
sent here to
captivatte all of my love
I see it
your smile
it is there to
comfort me when darkness
over comes me and
is the only thing i see
it is a rare sight but
each time i see it
the darkness seems to fade
it lights my way straight to you
your fangs are now
more clearly seen against
your crimson lips
for you are my
Angel of Hell
sent here to see
me through all of the darkness
and with you by my side
we shall go hand in hand
into Hell from once we came
and confront Satan and
set you free with me
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this is my dumb journal filled mostly with poetry and some other s**t. mostly whatever i feel like putting in it.
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touch my skin and feel ice
look into my eyes and see hatered
listen to my thoughts and hear death
taste my blood and relish bitterness
breathe my breath and retrieve nothing
all because of you i am dead inside
look into my eyes and see hatered
listen to my thoughts and hear death
taste my blood and relish bitterness
breathe my breath and retrieve nothing
all because of you i am dead inside
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