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my first poem for roxanne
ashes to ashes
dust to dust
baby u make my heart wanna bust
its true,
i fell inlove with you
your voice is music to my ears
it makes my mind stop and destroys all my fears
when i hug you
i feel immortal
baby your perfection
i will always be here for your protection
you will always have my affection
its true baby
i fell madly inlove with you

this poem is for my girl, for she makes me feel immortal when im with her
roxanne, baby i love you






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DiorDevil
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commentCommented on: Wed Dec 13, 2006 @ 02:45am
It's Beautiful Big Little Brother! Nicely done and it Rhymes well!


commentCommented on: Wed Dec 13, 2006 @ 08:56pm
awww baby i love it almost as much as i love you.
i love you so much. heart
* heart roxie heart *



dark_mistress_katrina
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Mrs_Edward_Cullen
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commentCommented on: Sun Jan 07, 2007 @ 06:21pm
That's so sweet! crying


commentCommented on: Sat Apr 28, 2007 @ 07:06am
*clapping hands* and meter is perfect too! I like it ^_^ rhymes perfectly too!



ObsessiveWritingDisorder
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