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aggggggh *cutcut*
nah... >3>
yes! whee my first poem! read it, hedghog!!!

i wrote this on the lark sweatdrop ...its not my best...

Muddy puppies! Floppy ears,
Everything’s as it appears.

In the tall grass, on the hill,
In the meadow by the mill.

Puppy tussles, puppy play,
Puppy faces bright and gay.

Puppy noses in browns and blacks,
Puppy piles and puppy stacks!

Puppies frolic, puppies fight
In the dark they get a fright,

But curled together, they sleep as one.
These puppies have just oh such fun!



the next one was another one on the lark... i made it when we last visited disney, while i was thinking about weasles idea ...u need to think of a headbanger song when you read it... da, da-da DA-DA, da, da-da DA-DA, da, da-da-da-da-da DA,DA... thats how your supposed to do it whee ... its actually really cute... i was twelve. i could actually picture weasels doing this stuff... sweatdrop i actually thought of it in the middle of waiting to ride space mountain (off the top of my head), which would explain some of the lyrics. my dad liked it so much, that for the rest of the day in between rides, we would practise memorizing it.

Prune eating weasels,
Prune eating weasels,
Prune eating weasels with chainsaws!

Prune eating weasels,
Prune eating weasels,
Prune eating weasels obey no laws!

Prune eating weasels,
Prune eating weasels,
Prune eating weasels can cut down trees!

Prune eating weasels,
Prune eating weasels,
Prune eating weasels treat their fleas!

Prune eating weasels,
Prune eating weasels,
Prune eating weasels with chainsaws!

Prune eating weasels,
Prune eating weasels,
Prune eating weasels obey no laws!

Prune eating weasels,
Prune eating weasels,
Prune eating weasels can fly in space!

Prune eating weasels,
Prune eating weasels,
Prune eating weasels all over the place!

Prune eating weasels,
Prune eating weasels,
Prune eating weasels with chainsaws!

Prune eating weasels,
Prune eating weasels,
Prune eating weasels obey no laws!

(guitar solo)

Prune eating weasels,
Prune eating weasels,
Prune eating weasels with chainsaws!

(chainsaw noises)






User Comments: [3]
_melenee_
Community Member





Sun Jan 06, 2008 @ 12:13am


I like both of ur poems. Im okay at making poems but im not the best at it!! xp 3nodding blaugh biggrin xd 4laugh


hybrid -x1
Community Member





Sun Jan 06, 2008 @ 12:28am


hey dude!!!! nice poems ^_^ i like this weasel poem the best CoOOool mad d


tree-hugging pacifist
Community Member





Mon Jan 07, 2008 @ 02:25am


omg! i love ur prune eating weasels poem!!! it's the kind of random thing i love...^^ sweatdrop
and the puppy one, i must say, is also very good considering it's not your best.

btw does anyone know why it's showing her signature instead of mine?


Peyo:
A car runs on gas and a duck runs on bread. I run on yum yums.
User Comments: [3]
 
 
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