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Heart Repair
By Dominick Cortes

The heart at youth has so much freedom
It can sore to the skies and hit the sun
Touch the deepest sea floor and the widest valleys

But, once a Golden drop of addiction drips into your heart;
You feel complete, the veins pump profusily under its spell.
Not a care in the World, Just for the want of more

Slowly, the fluid stops flowing and the reality kicks in.
Air flow cuts. Sufficating the heart
The wraspy voice of want echos for return of the golden light.

Once perfectly formed, now sadly de-arrange by lose
Panicful, does the heart try to fix and mend itself, but it can't
A black, taintful liqud soon devours whats left

My heart is a warrior as all hearts are:
Scarred with memories that every beat bring them back stronger
Broken beyound repair: Stiched together by duct tape and false hope

Love is the hammer that crushs your heart into a billion pieces,
But love is also the bits that fall and spell

I love you






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WolfeTheDemon
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commentCommented on: Wed May 27, 2009 @ 05:10pm
damn straight is that true *toasts you and your poem with a beer*
i like it deep! well written! ^w^ now read an comment my crappy poems! >=3


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commentCommented on: Wed May 27, 2009 @ 07:27pm
nice poem dom im sticking with my story your gunna make a hell of a writer one day



Toamna_inimii
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MTbrainz XD
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commentCommented on: Wed May 27, 2009 @ 08:33pm
OH MY JESUS DOM! u mst become a writer! that poem is better then almost all the junk in my english text book!


commentCommented on: Sun May 31, 2009 @ 12:37am
im happy you made me read your poem
tis very beautiful
i hope you did't hurt the hamster lol



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ll Kyoya_Okamiyasha ll
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commentCommented on: Fri Jun 12, 2009 @ 09:05pm
stare here i read and commented...and liked the poems more than i thought sweatdrop


commentCommented on: Fri Jun 19, 2009 @ 07:12am
Hmm as much as I read Poems and slightly feel inspired to write my own...it won't ever happen cause you know me...I suck at poetry xp



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