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my story
ok my story i kno it wont be read to most ppl though i want atleast a few ppl to read it and comment dont comment bad or else...
Chapter 3 :D
Girl's life---- Boy's life
(part 3 >_< wink
- sorry I have'nt thought of the names yet...-
view of 2---
girl- cya!
> last at part 2 they had left off after walking with each other
they found out more things about each other they made memories<
part 3---
girl's home-
girl: I'm home!!
mom (girl's mom)- Welcome home! How was school?
girl: good hows your day been?
mom (girl's mom)- great, now go up stairs and do your homework and i'll make you a snack.
girl: okay then
*girl goes up stairs and falls on bed*
girl: What a wierd yet fun day it is. I better start my homework.
*does homework*
girl: I wonder why he said good luck on the homework...?
*does more homework*
girl: ... this is getting a bit hard.... ok now harder
girl thinking- ahhh! its hard TT^TT
girl: ahh he was right after every problem it gets hard.
*mom comes in*
mom (girl's mom): here you go its your rice with pickled radish
girl: : O THANK YOU!!!
mom (girl's mom): ok have fun!

Boy still walking-
boy: You know what that was fun. I wish we could do that more
man home is around the corner.
*walks more*
boy: I wonder how shes doing on the homework...
boy thinking- hmm maybe shes having trouble...
boy: ha I'm finally home.
*walks in*
boy's home:
boy: Good afternoon mom! I'm home from school!
mom (boy's mom): You seem very energetic. What happend to day?
boy: Oh I walked home with my best friend
mom (boy's mom): Great to hear I thought you guys forgot about each other
boy: So did I but its still ok.
mom (boy's mom): Ok then if you need anything theres food down here
boy: ok imma go do my homework now ok later!
-end of day-

Walking to school im the morning-
boy: hey! over here!
girl: Oh Hey!! whats up?
boy: nothing you?
girl: nah the homework was a bit hard...
boy: I told you good luck about it
girl: yah did you finish?
boy: yah
girl: yah I did to took me a hour! I mean usually its 15 minutes.
boy: wierd it took me 30 minutes
girl: WOAH! as expected from you
boy: yah come on school starts at 8:30
girl: right hmm its 1block away
boy: hmm ok
*walks all the way not talking*

School-
girl ( as class president): Reminder! Everyone the trip is tomorrow!
boy thinking- right the time when my plan begins
girl (as class president): So lets have fun!!!
-end of chapeter 3-

hewo everyone who read this thank you for reading my 3 chapters the next chapter my contain a suprise once again ty!






User Comments: [3]
xxx_vampyer kid_xxx
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Sun Jun 21, 2009 @ 09:25pm


i didnt get 2 read the 2nd 1 T-T. o and as for the names how about kristen and cyrus XD


X-tlSHINee-tlX
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Mon Jun 22, 2009 @ 01:41am


ok for those who read this story
the names will be:
saito for the boy
louise for the girl
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Caesarpon
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Mon Jun 22, 2009 @ 06:40am


i commented xD yay!
good story and keep up the work!!


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