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my story
ok my story i kno it wont be read to most ppl though i want atleast a few ppl to read it and comment dont comment bad or else...
Chapter 4 >.<
author:
Hi! Everyone!!! I want to tell you that with your help the story has gone great!
My goal is to get over 10 Chapters. Also I finally found out the names!
For the girl its: Louise
For the boy its: Saito
I just wanted to remind you that this yes the 4th chapter is containing a
huge suprise!
Also reminders:
Recycle
Always check if a chapter came out
Comment!
Have fun!
Yours truly,
the author, Terene

Girl's life-- Boy's life
View of Chapter 3:
School-
girl ( as class president): Reminder! Everyone the trip is tomorrow!
boy thinking- right the time when my plan begins
girl (as class president): So lets have fun!!!
-end of chapeter 3-

Chapter 4:
Trip day-
Saito thoughts- Its time! We're in the buss and our teacher is singing...
Louise: : o Nice job teach!
Saito: Do you really like him singing? Hes hogging the mike...
Louise: no not really though its great if I act nice
Teacher: Huh? Did you say something bad about my singing?
Louise and Saito: O_O NO! We didn't we love your singing!
Teacher: Yes, yes I know I sing good! No,.. not good but GREAT!
I shall sing again!
Saito: Wow bad idea...
Louise: yah...
Saito: Anyways what will you do?
Louise: Well thats easy
1st I'm going to take a warm bath
2nd I'm going into the arcade to play against the teacher on
dance dance revolution
and as soon as I know it, it'll be late enough to go to asleep then tomorrow well I don't know though I'm going in
the boat alone
Saito: How long are you staying in the boat?
Louise: I don't know

At the Japanese Hotel-
Louise: Woah! This place it big!
Saito: I know! sooo big biggrin
Louise: Well then i'll see you later im going to go take a bath
Saito: ok i'll go in my room and get some sleep my head hurts from teach's singing
Louise: Ok good night!
-end of day-

Louise's room-
Louise: =_= Ahh its morning I'll go change then eat.

Eating room-
Saito: Hey Louise!
Louise: Oh good morning Saito.
Saito: Good morning to you to. Wanna eat with me?
Louise: Sure. Go find a table while I get my food.
Saito: Ok. Oh yah they have origini your favorite.
Louise: : o ok
*Louise comes back from getting her food*
Saito: Welcome back
Louise: Haha thank you.
*Starts to eat and finishes*
Saito: Done.
Louise: ahh I think I got to much food that I can't finish.
Saito: Just throw it away
Louise: yah I did get to much. Well i'll throw it away and i'll be at the boat.

Boat under blankets-
Louise: Ahh it feels like i can feel the water.
*Saito liftes up the blanket*
Louise: eh-EH Saito don't scare me like that.
Saito: Sorry... Louise?
Louise: yah?
Saito: Do you think I like any other girl?
Louise: Yah you like Mitsuki right?
Saito: Mitsuki? Mitsuki?! Louise! LISTEN! I will NEVER like Mitsuki! I barely know her!
Listen theres only one girl I like. And thats you!
Louise: Come on Saito don't joke around.
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Saito: JOKE AROUND?! I LIKE YOU! ONLY YOU! I'll PROVE IT!
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*Louise pushes Saito a bit*
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Louise: eh- eh Saito.. do you really like me?
Saito: I really really
Louise: Really really?
Saito: Really really
Louise: uh uh ok

hehe ok thats a bit too intense.. anywho plz comment the next chapter is good to keep on reading! heart






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Mon Jun 22, 2009 @ 05:22pm


omg!!


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